It was a fine day in the woods little pink riding hood was a nice and kind person, She decided to take a jar of chocolate chippie cookies to her Grandad.In a far away castle. on the way she met a big bad wolf. “Where are you going,” asked the big bad wolf. “To my Grandad’s castle,” Answered little pink riding hood. “And may I ask what is in the jar,” asked the big bad wolf, “ A jar of my mummy’s famous chocolate chippie cookies my Grandad loves chocolate chippie cookies. But I must carry on i have got a long way to go. Can i come said the big bad wolf. No your a wolf not a human. So go a way now but a few minutes later the wolf was back.now what do you want said little pink riding hood so leave me alone little pink riding hood walked a little way and got to the castle door without the big bad wolf annoying her. She got in and gave the cookies to her grandad and they lived happily ever after!!!!! THE END!
By Sarah
Great narrative Sarah. We do need to work on editing as there are still a few errors in there.
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